Here’s the original creative image for this organic Instagram post —>

And here’s the copy.

So how would we improve it?

Simple.

Replace the image text:

Valtos Beach Voyage For Two


Body copy:

From sandy beaches to offshore islands.

Hire today, and enjoy a complimentary bottle of champagne and 25 euros off dinner at >local restaurant<.

No license needed.

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